Nice try, but don't light up that cigar, kiddo...

Good try, I'm sure you'll improve. I can't believe that you are actually going to have some of that language in a school project. You guys are going to be in some deep doodoo, DEEP DOODOO. All of the stereotypes were very funny, the whole cartoon was hilarious. You may want to learn a little japanese or official language, the next time you make a flick for any culture. Good research on the atom bombs, it's cool that you showed the different types and how they operate. Pretty funny, keep 'em coming.

CREATE YOUR OWN CHARACTER

Go out on a limb and make a character that does not date back to the 50's. It's one thing to pay tribute to a character and put them in your movie, it's another thing to directly copy an old character and act like it's a new creation . To shame.

Perfect Score!! Superb!

Man, I've been waiting for a game like this to show up on Newgrounds. It reminds me of Pitfighter, did you ever play that in the arcade? I would have worked on the wardrobe though, maybe you could of had some badass armor on or something. The characters were absolutely hilarious, especially the drunken brawler! Please make another one.

Good Flash, but needs more thought.

Wow, the Flash and scripting were impressive! You are a pro for sure. However, you are a bad game planner and writer. This game was made for a very specific person in mind and not for general people (Newground users). I understood everything you put in front of me, but there were some things that should not have been there (wingdings). Work on your story and try to get in the frame of mind that the gamer-waking up to a locked room- would be in. I truly believe everyone would have starved to death or killed themselves in that room. The knife in the trash can was completely absurd, it would have been better to cut open the pillow, that makes more sense. I know I'm being ultra realistic, but the game's reasoning is conflicting with itself. Get a good puzzle-game player to help write and plan your next game. If you do that I think you will achieve great status. Superior work, honestly. I can tell you work very hard to achieve your goals.

Great Idea, poor logic.

If the teacher is going to have a field of vision, then the green cone should represent that(in its whole). Thank you.